But first let's look at those intro paragraphs
Does the writer have a good hook that relates to their topic?
Is background information there? Is it appropriate?
Is the thesis well-developed?
Does the speaker explain why their thesis matters?
Then IREEC!
HW: Complete a draft of your first body paragraph (in IREEC format)
Dear Mr. Bodensteiner,
ReplyDeleteI was wondering if I could do any of tonight's homework. If it is possible for me to do anything, please let me know of the assignment. Thanks.
Sincerely,
Lauren K.
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