Writing Thesis Statements

Thesis statements are often easy to write, but difficult to develop. Good thesis statements are:

1. Descriptive/Specific-- they mention certain characteristics or a variety of ideas that will be further explored in the body paragraphs
2. Focused/limited- the ideas presented should be related

Take a look at several finely crafted thesis statements below:

 Example:
In “A Worn Path,” Eudora Welty creates a fictional character in Phoenix Jackson whose determination, faith, and cunning illustrate the indomitable human spirit.

Note that the work, author, and character to be analyzed are identified in this thesis statement. The thesis relies on a strong verb (creates). It also identifies the element of fiction that the writer will explore (character) and the characteristics the writer will analyze and discuss (determination, faith, cunning).

“The Third and Final Continent” exhibits characteristics recurrent in writings by immigrants: tradition, adaptation, and identity.

In “The Masque of the Red Death,” Poe uses the symbolism of the stranger, the clock, and the seventh room to develop the theme of death.

As you begin writing yours, remember to be just as clear and descriptive.

HW: Please complete your thesis statement for class tomorrow.